It was hot. Even inside the wreckage of the fallen ship it was uncomfortably warm to Kordath Bleu. His coat lay draped over a crate nearby, the collar of his shirt was unbuttoned and sleeves pushed up to his elbows. Still it was too much. Shadow Gate had been sent to this sand ball for some kind of recovery mission, though Bleu was sketchy on the details. The Gate Wardeness hadn’t been very clear, which was just like the manic, psychotic Twi’lek.
You’ll know when ya find it, he thought in mocking tones as he pushed debris around, trying to uncover a console.
He wasn’t a fan of Jakku so far. Just sand, sand everywhere - it was coarse, rough and irritating. And it was in bloody everything. The Ryn growled as he dragged the remains of a light fixture that had fallen from the ceiling off the console and found...nothing, again. Stripped bare of parts by scavengers.
“Why tha kark are we even here?!” he shouted in frustration.
“Because that’s the mission,” came a tired reply from behind him. The Ryn felt foolish as he glanced over his shoulder at his teammate. They’d been paired off when the team had made it to the site, their boss lady had a weird grin about her when she’d assigned the two of them. He wondered idly how much K’tana knew about what had happened after the Shadow Gate party a few weeks back as he watched Zujenia work. Realizing he wasn’t doing anything but humming to himself and watching her move, he coughed and turned back to find his next bit of work.
“Well it’s silly, there’s a bleedin’ war goin’ on and they sent us out here. I mean, ya know I’m not exactly one fer fightin’ but still, feels wrong ta be away.”
“Are you going to keep complaining about this? It’s been the same thing the last two hours out of you, don’t you have anything else to talk about?”
She was right, he’d been whining almost continually since they made planetfall. On the other hand, any other topic he’d like to bring up with the Half Ryn girl...woman, he thought, glancing over at her again, were primed for a fight. Probably. Maybe. The heat must have been getting to him as he cocked his head to the side while she dug through a pile of debris, her white hair pulled back to keep it out of the way.
“Can I help you, Bleu?”
He blinked and realized she was staring at him over her shoulder, amber eyes drilling into him.
“Uhh, just, uhhh...uhh,” he stuttered, put on the spot and uncharacteristically finding himself short on words. Panic caused his first real kark up of the afternoon. “Why da ya feel tha need ta hide yer tail, luv?”
Wait, what?
“What?” she replied, her tone even and devoid of emotion. He was also pretty sure she hadn’t blinked.
“Just, uh, ya know, it’s just I do nae get it,” he gave her a little wave with his own tail as well as a shrug. “This lot is more or less used ta mine these days, don’t see why ya feel tha need ta hide it while workin’. Or at all, really, but that’s yer business.”
“You’re right, it is my business.” She turned back to the piled she was working through.
Way ta go, idiot. Oh, how bout ya keep talking, that’ll fix everythin’
Uncertain how to proceed, the Ryn ran a hand through his sweat drenched hair, causing it to stand up in disarray. With a sigh, he walked over to where she was and knelt down, shuffling bits of junk around in an effort to look busy.
“I did nae mean nothin’ by it, Zuj, I just... I don’t see why ya can’t be comfortable around me, at least. I mean, ya got nothin’ I ain’t seen before.”
“Excuse me?” came the hissed reply.
“Tha...tail, luv, I mean tha tail,” he said quickly. “Besides,” now he tried to give her a grin, she was watching from the corner of her eye, he was certain, “ya saw a lot more of me after that party than I ever saw of you, shouldn’t I be the uncomfortable one?”
Now she turned to look at him, golden eyes alight. “Thought we agreed that night never happened.” Not a question.
“Nothin’ happened, ya had a wee bit ta much ta drink, I let ya crash at my place. Dunno why that’s some kinda problem, lass, I’m rather fond of ya ya...know…” he stopped and swallowed, realizing his mouth had gotten away from his brain once more.
She grabbed him by his beard, something that the Force had screamed at him was about to happen but he found himself too mortified with himself to react in time. “I woke up in your bed without a stitch on. With you wandering around without a shirt making caf and looking smug. And you had the nerve to tell me that I, I made a pass at you the night before,” she hissed at him, her tones low and her face darkening. Kord didn’t think it was from the heat.
He gaped, ignoring the discomfort of his beard being grasped so tightly, staring at her as she berated him for something he’d had little, if any, control over. “By tha gods yer a pretty one when yer angry, ain’t ya?”
Wait, what? No, idiot, no.
This time, not even the Force could have saved him despite the warnings, now with the grip she had on his beard when her amber eyes flashed. She slapped him, hard enough that when the stars faded, he saw her shaking the hand as if it stung.
“Sorry, that just kinda, uhh, came out. I’ll- I’ll go work over in tha other corner, yeah?”
He stood, taking her silence as a sign that he should move on before he messed things up anymore than he had. Nothing had happened that night, well, she’d made a pass at him, but she’d been bloody sloshed. The third member of their little trio that night had attested to his behavior that night, that he’d put her to bed and not done anything untoward. She’d chased him about the apartment when he’d remarked on her ability in the kissing department, finally making him swear not to bring it up again.
As he turned away he glanced down at her again, hoping he could think up some way to salvage...whatever it was they had between them before he karked it entirely. His tail lashed in irritation and he heard a yelp behind him right before his feet were swept out from under him.
“Did you just swat me on the rear with that thing?”
He tried to say it was an accident but found himself instead rolling across the uneven decking to avoid her boots. “Luv, it was- wait, gah!” he shouted as he tried to regain his feet, catching a heel to his gut for his efforts, knocking the breath from him.
Kordath held his midsection and groaned as he saw the tanned, white haired woman stalk towards a corner of the room, wondering why she was...oh.
That’s where she’d put her gear, he realized, as the electro staff thrummed to life.
“We need to talk about your manners.”
Pretty sure I’ve had this dream, but I don’t think it hurt this much when I did, he thought, rolling over to push himself up from the sand-covered, metal deck.
“Too late for sorry, eh?” he asked with a sigh. “Can’t this wait till we’re back somewhere cooler, luv? This place is miserable.”
Her staff buzzed like a swarm of angry insects as it whipped past his head, yanking several strands of Bleu’s hair as he scrambled out of the way.
“Guess that’s a no,” he muttered.
Syntax
Should use a comma after "still" for flow.
Manic is a form of psychosis, making this repetitious.
"Now" doesn't quite fit the context or flow here, "not" would have been better, even if repetitious with "not even the Force" preceding it.
Story
I'd just like to say I love everything about this set-up. I was entertained and engaged throughout. Nicely done.