Thank you for warp speed! Now, to get the frak out of here. Zujenia thought between her deep, steady breaths as the shuttle shakily touched down. The force flickered and weaved, writhing around her being as she had commanded it an hour or so ago, hiding her from detection via the Force. She has improved on the feat, it was indeed one of the first powers she had ever accessed, but frankly the Half-Ryn did not wish to test how long she could hide her presence on this craft.
Which lead her to ask herself again, why exactly was she on the House Galeres’ Quaestor’s vessel in the first place. A mission, always a mission.
The Knight had been called into the office of her own House’s leader with Terran Koul sitting there, legs crossed on top of his disarrayed desk. The Kiffar had noted the quickly growing and adapting Shadow, evaluating her as capable for infiltrating Braecen Kaeth’s hanger and reconing any information that may connect the Galeren to the assaults on Arcona. Thus, Zujenia had found herself scrambling into a small compartment, knees scrunched up into her chest, which, by the way, was now a really cramped position, as the owner of the spaceship came waltzing in.
Her ears twitched as footsteps drew her from her thoughts and back into the iron hull of the shuttle. Zujenia peered through the three slits in the compartment’s door with dark amber eyes, watching a pair of heavy boots and dark clothing past by. A moment later, she heard the familiar clunk swoosh of the pressurized hatch, followed by the sounds of howling wind and pouring rain.
...One hundred forty-eight...One hundred forty-nine...One hundred fifty.
Having started her countdown as soon as she heard the large door hiss shut, Zujenia had waited, her stomach clenching slightly in anxiety of her upcoming actions. Pushing against the poor with her left hand, it popped from its magnetic lock, swinging open with a slight squeak. A strand of hair fell in front of her face as she crawled out of the tight space, grimacing as her muscles and joints ached. Turning the latch shut behind her before returning her attention to the realm of the Force, reaching out tendrils of it within a fifty foot radius, searching for any humanoids within the area.
“Errhm,” a clearing of a voice behind her failed to warn her prior to the Force, her mind’s eye in the field affixing upon the glowing energy the possessed the physical body the voice belonged to. The Half-Ryn jumped, twisting around like a spurred Tuskcat, gaze locking onto one Braecen Kaeth, who was standing between her and the ship’s exit.
What? When did he?... Amber eyes trailed past the taller Human, alighting upon two alcoves near either side of the exit. Zujenia slapped herself mentally as she realized the foolish mistake she made, she should've checked for his presence prior to exiting the small compartment.
“You are...Atyiru’s apprentice, correct? Zujenia was it? What are you doing on my ship?” Braecen’s eyes furrowed as he waited for the Knight’s response, arms crossed. Blood pumped behind Zujenia’s ears as she flipped through a thousand things to say, unsure of how this man may act either one, hopefully not with any violence.
“I...I snuck on your shuttle as a dare.” the Half-Ryn stood while speaking, one hand lightly brushing the steel wall, the other relaxed just behind her, and near the vibroblade on her belt. Her electrostaff hung beside her slugthrower, yet the close quarters in this small hallway would restrict her movement. “I know, it was a childish thing to do especially for, uh, knight, sir. It will not happen again--”
“Enough.” Kaeth’s stern voice cut through her swift-spun lie, leaving the Shadow to stare blankly at him. “I’m well aware you had greater attentions here. Now speak.”
Zujenia’s eyes darted back and forth from their metal surroundings and the Quaestor. Her hand bumped into her vibroblade’s hilt, fingers curling around it, tight, longing, scared. Before she pulled the weapon from her it’s sheath, a realization pinged in her mind. Galeres was a more militia styled unit, perhaps, the Half-Ryn’s eyes narrowed as she soften her hold, he will understand orders.
“I am unable to disclose the reason behind being here.” she flashed her gaze onto his, her resolve to get out of here alive was creeping in over her fear. “I believe you can understand this.”
“Understood.”
The hull was fell into a pregnant silence as the two individuals stood, watching each other, evaluating the other and unwilling to back down. The low lights lining the walls flickered as a strong gust of wind rattled the ship’s frame. Zujenia’s heart jumped, dancing rapidly in the suspense as she wondered whether the Human was going to launch an attack or if she should make a break for it. She put herself into a pattern of deeper breathing, attempting to calm her nerves, calling upon the Force to coax it.
“I may make my leave here.”
“Of course.” Kaeth nodded, stepping behind him and slightly to his side, arm outstretched, gesturing to the door.
The Knight slowly proceeded past him, battling the urge to grab one of her weapons for protection. A wave of warning from the Force flashed through her body, guiding Zujenia to shift her weight in time to react as Braecen launched towards her. She instinctively dropped into a deep stance, left leg swiftly sliding back. Her right hand wrapped around his wrist, left hand grasping on beneath it, she twisted her body into the man as her arms rotated his in a large arc, propelling the larger humanoid to the ground.
Making no haste, Zujenia headed for the door. A sudden jerk on her ankle left her finding herself falling face first onto the decking. She grimaced at the fresh scrape on her cheek, wrenching her torso around to lock onto her assailant. Braecen towered above her, one hand casually wiping dust of his robes, eyes burned into her with fighting intent.
“Impressive, martial arts skills.” he reached into his garbs, pulling out two elongated cylinders. “You may leave, Zujenia, but only after you’ve demonstrated the skills the Shadow Lady saw in you.”
The Half-Ryn swallowed, as two blaring white sabers snapped and hissed to life.
Syntax
The Force is a proper noun and should always be capitalized.
Should be "she had".
Should be a question mark.
Should be "reconning", which is short form for reconnoiter.
Comma overload! Should be changing it up with em-dashes or splitting into multiple sentences.
Should be "pass by".
Should be a comma in the dialogue, not a period.
The "it's" isn't needed, and would be "its" for the possessive anyhow.
"softened" would be correct for this tense.
Should be a comma.
"was" is not needed here.
Should be "off".
Period instead of comma again.
Story
I don't quite follow this from a story point of view. Why wouldn't she make haste to get out of there? Casually strolling away doesn't make sense.
Realism
Warp speed is Star Trek, the Wars uses Light speed and Hyperspace.