K'tana exhaled slowly, then drew on the Force with her next inhalation. Concealing her presence the Twi’lek left no sign, except for a rapid trailing of rapid footsteps through the platform’s puddles. The Savant smiled as she appeared behind Zujenia, her mouth opening in taunt.
But the Knight was very perceptive. She had watched the Twi’lek’s footsteps without moving and heard the woman inhale as she prepared to speak. K’tana, being utterly unaware, was caught off guard when the Half-Ryn spun around and backhanded her across the cheek.
“Hey!” The Savant cried out indignantly, holding her stinging cheek for effect.
“Well, you shouldn’t cheat!” Zujenia said, throwing her arms out in frustration.
The Twi’lek quirked an eyebrow.
“Let me show you what that word really means.”
The violet woman was a blur of movement as she lunged towards the Knight. Force fueled muscles amplified her to near unperceivable speed. K’tana pirouetted once, ending up behind Zujenia’s outstretched wrist and, stabbing her heel into the back of the Half-Ryn’s knee, dove her to the ground. The Gate Stewardess crashed to the floor, arm spasming in protest as the women hit the metal rooftop.
“This," the Gate Wardness whispered, leaning towards her fallen subordinate, "would be cheating."
The Twi’lek tried not to smirk arrogantly as she released a quick burst of electricity from her palm and through Zujenia’s left arm.
The Knight screamed in pain as lightning coursed through her body, but the shock was over almost before it began.K'tana stepped away, panting with exertion. The Knight gasped, then grit her teeth as she worked to stem the flow of anguish that pulsed through her nerves. Her legs felt weak and rubbery as she fought to rise back to her feet. Her shaky limbs resisted her every command, but eventually Zujenia managed to face the Twi'lek.
Although the Gate Wardeness felt drained - her power ebbing back to the abyss from where it came - she showed no sign. K’tana stood stoic and smirked at Zujenia as though the effort of harnessing the Force had not affected her. Inside, she was weary. The Savant drew a slow breath and decided the game was no longer any fun.
Just one more round.
The Twi’lek became a violet blur, her lightsaber hissing as it evaporated the rain around it. She zigzagged, appearing to dart between the large droplets of water. Her agile form left the hard ground, twisting mid-leap as she brought Ikha down towards Zujenia’s face.
Her hand forced by her superior, the Stewardess brought her own lightsaber up to bear the brunt of K’tana’s vicious attack. As their blades met and the Savant’s feet touched the ground, she spun, sliding her violet weapon down to the Knight’s hilt and slid close enough to strike.
With a smile on her face, as though in jest, the Twi’lek reared back her other hand and then drove it across Zujenia’s face.
A piercing shriek echoed over the landing pad, followed by a burst of laughter.
Crimson drops, as large as the rain falling from the sky, hit the ground and diluted in the puddle at K’tana’s feet. She had screamed in a moment of shock and pain as the back of her hand was sliced open on the Half-Ryn’s chitinous beak-like nose. As soon as the adrenaline hit her the not-so-stable Twi’lek burst out laughing.
It’s too ridiculous! K’tana thought, looking at her injured right hand as she disengaged the lightsaber in her left.
Fortunately, Zujenia - tired as she was - also found it pretty funny.
“I told you not to cheat!” The Half-Ryn said, holding back her smile.
“You did not! You just pointed out that I was! Totally not the same thing,” K’tana said, flashing her disarming crooked smile and causing Zujenia to shake her head with a grin.
They both tensed for a moment as a bright light shined down upon them and their ride hovered above the landing area. The two women moved from out of its path and relaxed.
“Don’t tell anyone,” K’tana said, watching the ship land.
“Tell anyone what? That you were beat up by my nose?” The Stewardess chortled, giving K’tana a sideways glance.
K’tana cocked her head to the side and stuck out her tongue.
“No silly! That your nose fights better than you do!” The Twi’lek’s bubbly laugh trailed behind her as she ran for the transport.
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Story
You set up the conflict in a natural way and had a strong amount of action for an opening post. Often matches between team mates or Clan mates feel forced in their setup but you did well. You set the stage for a fun and believable battle.