Competition: [GJW XIV Phase II] Fiction and Audiobook - The Front Lines

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[GJW XIV Phase II] Fiction and Audiobook - The Front Lines
This competition is in the [GJW XIV Phase II] Fiction and Audiobook Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 5 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 21.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

I am transmitting the primary defensive locations we must hold. It is critical they do not fall to the Collective.
- Telaris Cantor

The Collective, with aid from Evant Taelyan, has successfully bypassed the planetary shields of Arx, landing on the planet’s surface. The battle now rages on multiple fronts, both in space and on Arx itself.

The Front Lines

Your entry has the chance to shape the direction of the War’s storyline. Your task is to choose 1 of the 3 separate options below to write about for your entry. The option that garners the most entries will be used to steer the War storyline into a related course of events.

Options

Participants must use one of the following prompts to craft their entry:


Option 1: DEFEND EOS CITY

Write from the perspective of your main or alternative character as they rush to Eos City. With the Collective now on the surface of Arx, they are targeting all that call the planet home. Rise to the defense of the population of the planet and prevent the Collective from accomplishing their slaughter. Clan and Iron Legion forces are trying to relieve the city, but for now you are trapped in the face of overwhelming odds.


Option 2: STOP THE DEPUTY GRAND MASTER

Write from the perspective of your main or alternative character as they venture into the main Shadow Academy facility on Arx. There the Deputy Grand Master, Evant Taelyan, is leading a host of Collective forces, seeking to use the deep tunnels that connect the Academy and the Dark Ascent. You have witnessed his betrayal and know he must be stopped.


Option 3: WREAK CHAOS

Write from the perspective of your main or alternative character as they capitalize on the chaos of the Collective attack. The Dark Council and the Clans’ military forces are now engaged in full-on warfare. With the enemy on all sides, the so-called “allies” of the Brotherhood are distracted. Use this time to your advantage by sowing chaos against the other clans or diverting Brotherhood resources for personal use.


Rules

In order to have your fiction count as a vote for your option of choice, your entry must contain an [Option X] tag in the submissions file name, or the document itself. Any entry that does not include an Option tag will not count towards voting, but is still eligible for participation/placement.

Example: [Option 1]BestFictionEver.pdf

  • Participants must submit entries in .pdf, .doc, or .docx format, or use the submission text field (markdown capable).
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be disqualified and ineligible for participation or placement.
  • There is no maximum word cap.
  • Your story should be centered on your Main or Alternative character, or an. Slotted NPCs, Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are not only allowed but encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around either your Main or Alternative character.
  • A snapshot of your Main or Alternative character loadout must be selected and submitted with your entry through the checkbox submission field.
  • This competition will award up to 4 bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions.

Grading

Grading will be done utilizing the Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XIV: Homefront
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, Lord Dacien Victae
Running time
2020-06-20 until 2020-07-08 (19 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
76 subscribers, of which 69 have participated.
Results
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
[Option 1] SW-ThePathToTomorrow.pdf
Textual submission

[Option 1] SW-ThePathToTomorrow.pdf

Placement
1st place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
[Option 1] GJWXIV Fiction P2 - Stay.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Seraine "Erinyes" Taldrya Ténama
File submission
[GJW XIV Phase 2] The Front Lines.docx
Textual submission

Placeholder, and uploading so I can show my work. The distance between the Shadow Academy and the Dark Ascent is based on the Wiki entry for Arx listing its diameter as 13,000km and the diagonal measurement of the map of Arx (which I assume is the circumference of the planet) being 2203 px, converting to 18.54km/pixel. The distance between the centres of the two icons was 375.6px, or 6963.624km. Note: I don't expect this to have any impact whatsoever on judging, but since I put the work in to figure all this out, I was damn well going to share it. :P

Placement
3rd place
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
File submission
[Option 3] Eternity’s Price.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Combat Master "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission
The Unexpected. -Option 2-.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
gjw15b (2).pdf
Textual submission

Option 1 chosen

Placement
6th place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
[Option 1] Phase2 Fiction, QA14369.pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
3714-[Option 2] - front lines.docx
Placement
8th place
9th place
Lucine Vasano
Member
Lucine Vasano
File submission
[Option1]Lucine War fic P2.pdf
Placement
9th place
10th place
Sera Kaern
Member
Sera Kaern
File submission
[Option 1] Operation_ Symphonia.pdf
Textual submission

https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/15689/snapshots/2921/5183

Placement
10th place
Member
Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
File submission
GJW14TheFrontLinesOPTION2Beef756.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Len Iode
Submission
Colonel Len Iode opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Defend Eos City.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Darcy Avarik
File submission
[Option 2]To The Rescue - 307.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Doctor Avery Erinos Watson
File submission
The Front Lines_ Option 1.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
FrontlinesOption2.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Jaa Shif
Submission
Jaa Shif opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
High Inquisitor Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

OPTION 1

Major Hector Ricmore
Clan Vizsla
Eos City, Arx

Eos City was filled with pure and utter chaos. Soldiers moved to their assigned points, medics and volunteers carried the injured to field hospitals, while others carried munitions to defensive positions. The air was filled with flashes of blaster cannon fire and the occasional explosion when one of the anti air weapons managed to shoot down a Collective fighter. With the sheer amount of ships fielded by The Collective keeping the ships from performing bombing runs was the best the AA could do.

Within one of the few designated landing zones sat a GX1 Diplomatic Short Hauler named Ship. The ship lowered its ramp allowing a red armored figure to emerge. The figure exited the ship before waving and calling to one of the passing soldiers.

“Thank you for coming. Major Ricmore here with a few crates of medical supplies, ammunition, and several E Web emplacements. Where do you want them?”

“Bring the medical supplies to the nearest field hospital. You can find it if you take the left exit out of the landing zone and make a right. Bring the E Web and ammo to wherever you were posted.”

“Are you sure that’s the best place to put it? We could-”

“I need to get going. It’ll be fine.”

The soldier left in a hurry, no doubt moving to his assigned post.

Hector walked back into the Ship and picked up one of the medical crates. He began moving towards the field hospital. Pausing a moment, he activated his commlink and contacted the Deathwatch Artillery Battalion.

“Major Ricmore checking in, how’s everyone holding up?”

“Got tired of hanging with the flyboys major?”

“Ha! You wish. Nah figured I could do more good planetside than against the Collective fleet. Besides I’ve got a plan that I could use your help with.”

The comm unit crackled with a variety of responses from the men and women of the Battalion.

“Count me in major.”

“Are we going to blow something up again?”

“Getting back at the Collective? You don’t need to even ask.”

The Zygerrian let out a pleased smirk. “Happy to hear the approval. Now I’m certain you all have realized that the Collective lacks any proper transports for their infantry, they need to land capital ships in order to offload any of their troops.”

He paused for a minute as he dropped off the crate of medical supplies.

“Landing their capital ships puts them at risk from our artillery and heavy weapons platforms. Many of which are currently occupied with the swarms of fighters above the city but I have a plan to deal with them.”

“Is it dangerous or stupid?”

“I’m hurt that you would jump to that conclusion.”

“Is it dangerous or stupid?”

Hector let out a huff. “Dangerous, but only to me. Normally it would also affect allied pilots but the Iron Legion’s orders to keep the skies clear still stands.”

“What could possibly be a risk to all allied fighters?”

“Massive Emp detonation.”

“Are you mad? You could cripple our entire comm network!”

“As long as the transmitters are outside the range it should be fine. The ships should be high enough to ensure that happens. If not, the Collective will be just as hampered as we are and we can deal with it then. I’ll need some volunteers to help unload my ship and load the emp devices onboard.”

Some of the battalion agreed. The supplies were offloaded, the E Webs set up in strategic positions, and the emp devices brought onto the ship.

As some of the volunteers were returning to their positions Hector noticed a short Pantoran walking towards him.

“Hello there! Major Ricmore right?”
“Yes, can I help you?”

“Ah, you can call me Sei. Bossman heard about your plan and sent me in case things go wrong. I’m a scout, I’ll be your eyes and ears on the Collective.”

The Strategist nodded. “A bit of insurance couldn’t hurt. I want you with the Deathwatch Artillery Battalion by the Proton artillery. The vantage point will allow you to have eyes and the Collective and you can act as a spotter if needed.”

The Pantoran was practically vibrating with excitement. “Yessir, I’ll be on my ways now.”
He turned and bolted towards his assigned position.

Hector shook his head mirthfully before climbing onto the Diplomatic Short Hauler. Strapping himself in, he turned on the ship before lifting off into the air.

The Collective fighters were on him in moments, blaster fire ripping through the light armor of his ship.

Unbuckling his harness, Hector quickly ran towards the small hangar within his ship. Opening the cockpit of the escape craft, the Zygerrian all but threw himself into his V wing, Ship within a Ship.

The pilot opened the hangar doors and flew out into the atmosphere.

Some of the Collective fighters broke formation to chase. He couldn’t allow that.

Activating his commlink, Hector contacted his Deathwatch allies. “Activate the EMP now.”

“We can’t. You aren’t clear of the blast radius!”

“Just activate it now!” The Zygerrian yelled.

A distant explosion alerted Hector that his order had been followed. His descent towards the planet's surface became a chaotic death spiral as he lost all control over his ship.

“Son of a Kath Hound.”

Beep beep beep beep

Alarms sounded throughout the ship as the pilot struggled to regain any semblance of control over his vessel. Rebooting the system, Hector was able to nudge the ship just enough to avoid smash into a building, instead the V wing clipped the side and began to spin out of control.

The Zygerrian wrestled with the controls, desperately trying to end the spinning and fix the ships descent. The ship continued to spin until it smashed into the ground and everything went black.

Some time later

Hector awoke to the bright red light of a flare shining above the crash site. Blinking his eyes at the harsh light he attempted to get up, only to collapse as a sharp pain ripped through his chest.

“You doing okay down there buddy?”

Raising his head towards the voice Hector saw a head of purple hair and pale blue skin illuminated by the flare.

Sei reached down and pried open the cockpit. Placing his arms under Hector’s armpits, he lifted him up and out of the ship. As he lifted Hector, the Zygerrian’s boot caught the edge of the ship, causing them both to tumble to the ground.

“Aaargh” He shouted in pain.

The Pantoran got up and rushed over. “Kriff, sorry man. You really aren’t looking so good.”

The pair heard footsteps and voices growing closer. Sei got up and called “Oi! We’re over here”

Hector’s eyes widened in alarm. “Wait! We don’t know if their friendly”

Sei crouched down and patted Hector on the shoulder. “Don’t worry about it big guy. You crashed closer to our lines. Besides, your plan seemed to have worked out perfectly. With the fighters blown straight to the afterlife our cannons were able to focus on their ground forces. Their armor can’t get near our lines and we’re holding quite well thanks to the E Webs you brought.”

The footsteps grew even closer and revealed a strike team of Vizsla troops. They gathered around the pair and lifted Hector up before carrying him to a field hospital.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Tracinya Beviin Entar
Submission
Warlord Tracinya Beviin Entar opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
File submission
Option 3_ WREAK CHAOS.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra
Submission
Alaisy "Aphotis" Tir'eivra opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
Option 2 The Front Lines.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Submission
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Robert Sadow
File submission
Option 1 - Robert Sadow 3944.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Malisane Sadow
Submission
Malisane Sadow opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Xendar Thendaris
File submission
Option 1 Defend the City.odt
Placement
No placement
Member
Ryan Hawkins
Submission
Ryan Hawkins opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Nikora Rhan
Submission
Nikora Rhan opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
File submission
GJW14Fic2-13299.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Magik
Submission
Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Aylin Sajark
File submission
Option 2 - Face off.pdf
Textual submission

Zentru'la is used with permission from Zentru'la

Placement
No placement
Member
Montresor
Submission
Montresor opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Meleu Karthdo
File submission
[Option 3]Meleu_Karthdo_The_Front_Lines.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Rear Admiral Arcia Cortel
Submission
Rear Admiral Arcia Cortel opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Agate Gua'lara
Submission
Agate Gua'lara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Tomora Nay'ek
File submission
DJB - GJW XIV The Front Lines.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
A deleted dossier
File submission
[Option 3] The Front Lines.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Lumyi Hicyl
Submission
Lumyi Hicyl opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
File submission
[Option 3] A Toast To The Frontlines (GJW XIV).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Mauro Wynter
File submission
Objective 1 Defending Eos City.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Duke Kojiro Keibatsu Sadow
File submission
[Option 2] Koji - 8106.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
File submission
Taking it to the Streets.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Tassk Adroc
File submission
The Front Lines.pdf
Textual submission

Option 1

Placement
No placement
Member
Fist Uji Tameike
File submission
[Option 1] Kashiro still doesn't know why he's here..pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Hand of the Emperor Korvyn
File submission
[option 3] GJW entry 8930.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Furios Morega di Plagia
File submission
[Option 3]FuriosFiction.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
File submission
[Option One]Front Lines.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Supreme Chancellor Cassandra Oriana Taldrya
File submission
[Option2]End of the War.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Creon Neverse
File submission
The Front Lines.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Seer A'lora Kituri
File submission
[GJW XIV Phase II] Fiction - [Option 3_].docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Jafits Skrumm
Submission
Jafits Skrumm opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
General Daniel Stephens
Submission
General Daniel Stephens opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Darth Aeternus
File submission
[OPTION 1] Aeternus.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
[Option 1] GJW XIV Defend Eos City(1).pdf
Textual submission

Callsign Q-tip = Yumni

Placement
No placement
Member
General Kell Palpatine Dante
File submission
[Option 1] Defend the Breach.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
[Option 2] TuQ’uan Varick On The Run.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Wagglehorn
File submission
[Option 1] Wagglehorn Awakes.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae
Submission
Lord Marick Tyris Arconae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Bentre Stahoes
File submission
Front Lines- [Option 2] Evant Must Die.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Mako Henymory
File submission
The Front Lines - Occultan - Option 1 DEFEND EOS CITY.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Grand Master Declan Roark
File submission
[Option 3] Chaos.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Khryso Mallus
File submission
The Front Lines [Option 1].pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ambassador Revak K'Urr
Submission
Ambassador Revak K'Urr opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Dracaryis
File submission
[Option 2] Drac Kicks Evant In the Nards.pdf
Placement
No placement