Competition: Waxing Poetic come the New Year

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Waxing Poetic come the New Year

The Fiction:

Unlike their native counterparts, The Quorahi, the Vatali do not revere their moon for any religious or spiritual reasons, they revere it for two specific reasons, the frigid beauty of the frozen plains reflected in the night sky, and the mathematical precision by which they have been able to utilize it to keep their calendars. Orbiting Kiast 13 times in a year Kaerls serves as a steady calendar needing only a day of adjustment every 4 years.

The Quorahi and Gand, as many others throughout the Galaxy, look upon and revere their moon through many tribal legends. Equating the beauty of the moon and the vigor of the sun as though lovers dancing through the skies. Others still cherish moons for their part in the greater scheme of planetary ecosystems.

The Contest:

Write a Haiku revering the Moon, whether for its beauty, religious intonations, or how it affects the world around you.

  • A Haiku is a poetic form that consists of three lines, with five syllables in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third.
  • Syllable Counter A Useful Resource
  • Haiku will be judged based on emotive impact, word choice, and overall flow.
  • Submissions should be in .docx or .pdf formats unless submitted as plain text through the submission text box.
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Gauntlet of Resistance: A Celebration of Life and Culture
Organized by
High Councillor Masahiro Haku, Colonel Sythe
Running time
2024-02-05 until 2024-02-12 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
11 subscribers, of which 11 have participated.
Results
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Textual submission

Known first by your mist
Witness as sun guide our lives
Last vigil at rest

Placement
1st place
Member
Sivall Tenbriss Ya-ir Zoria
Textual submission

Globe of pure silver
Push and pull, the tides that bind
Of the heart and more

Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission

Mother, Matron, Crone,
Silvered silent protection,
Crowned in stars, bled earth.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Battlelord Nefarious "NeMo" Moniker
Submission
Battlelord Nefarious "NeMo" Moniker opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Dr. Bril Teg Arga
Submission
Dr. Bril Teg Arga opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
6th place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
6th place
Member
Ghost Luka Zarkot
Textual submission

oh porcelain moon
bless me with sight on dark nights
carry me forward

Placement
7th place
8th place
Tomora Nay'ek
Member
Tomora Nay'ek
Textual submission

An elegant rock,
so kind to return sunlight
after the sun hides.

Placement
8th place
9th place
Dr. Rhylance
Member
Dr. Rhylance
Textual submission

A silent sentry
Watching over nightly looms
Cycle, birth, re-birth

Placement
9th place
Member
Warlord Vincent Brujah
Textual submission

Rise when the time comes
Ill plans come to fruition
Underneath your light

Placement
10th place
Member
Colonel Sythe
Textual submission

It waxes and wanes
Ethereal light it haunts
Light in the darkness

Placement
Participation only