Competition: The Price of Freedom

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The Price of Freedom

The Fiction:

Several years ago warfare rocked the Galaxy on many fronts, threatening the collective rights of all sentients, unrest even spread to the farthest flung reaches of the Galaxy, where there was a grand uprising as an organization began to work their way throughout the outer rim in silence, purging those they viewed as lesser. The displaced from each of these, and many other Galactic happenings find a time to remember those who fought and those who fell, as well as what they fought for. In Kiast, the seasonal sprouting and bloom of the Lotus flower marks such a season, for the unified efforts of many who stood in opposition.

Every year in the waning week of The Gauntlet poems and photos are left in memorials around the Royal Lotus Ponds to let those still fighting or those lost know that they are remembered.

The Competition:

Write a simple Haiku about freedom and the steep cost to attain it.

  • A Haiku is a poetic form that consists of three lines, with five syllables in the first line, seven in the second, and five in the third.
  • Syllable Counter A Useful Resource
  • Haiku will be judged based on emotive impact, word choice, and overall flow.
  • Submissions should be in .docx or .pdf formats unless submitted as plain text through the submission text box.
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Gauntlet of Resistance: A Celebration of Life and Culture
Organized by
High Councillor Masahiro Haku, Ghost Sythe
Running time
2024-02-22 until 2024-02-29 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
Member
Dr. Bril Teg Arga
Textual submission

A trillion caged birds
Let their spirits soar, singing:
"Free forevermore."

Placement
1st place
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Textual submission

I reflect back on--
Seven thousand bright lights lost
--Fight in memory

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Warlord Vincent Brujah
Textual submission

A price paid in blood
Freedom rings for everyone
Never give it up

Placement
4th place