Competition: Maximum Brevity Series 14: Presents for the girls

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Maximum Brevity Series 14: Presents for the girls

Andrelious and Kooki's twins, Poppeliamarissia and Etholimarissia, have arrived. In 250 words or less, describe what gift, if any, your character would give the girls.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Maximum Brevity Series
Organized by
/competitions/8126, Kookimarissia Mimosa-Inahj
Running time
2014-10-01 until 2014-10-08 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
Member
Xathia Edraven
File submission
8396_maximum_brevity.docx
Placement
1st place
Member
Captain Aryn "Jade" Erinos-Magnuri
Textual submission

The Onderonian walked into the apartments of the Inahj family, his daughter Alyssa at his side. Both of them were bearing gifts for the family, one in Alyssa’s arms whilst Celevon carried two.

“I’m in no mood for your sarcastic, twisted games today Edraven. Tell me what you’re here for and get out,” Andrelious grumbled from behind a large mug of caf.

The Krath elbowed her husband sharply, a small glare directed at the Sith before she gave a polite smile to her friend. “Ignore him. He’s grumpy today, as he’s discovered that infants have some aversion to sleeping throughout the night.”

“We have gifts,” Alyssa piped up with a grin as she placed the wrapped package on the table. The Obelisk dutifully placed his own packages on the table, concealing a smirk as Andrelious reached for a certain gift first.

“Oh, lovely. Baby clothes, nappies and.. teething toys?” Kooki queried, looking up at the Onderonian from behind two open boxes.

“You will thank me in several months for that.”

“I don’t get it... what’s the whiskey for?” Soulfire’s Sergeant gave a confused glance.

“Ask that question again in ten years,” Celevon explained, letting a hint of his smirk show. “Come along, Alyssa. Let us not distract the new parents from their busy days.”

“Alrighty. Have a good day, you two,” Alyssa smiled, waving brightly as the two of them swiftly exited.

“Whiskey?” Andrelious asked his wife, confused considering the early hour.

“Twin females. Puberty.”

“...”

Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
Textual submission

“Oh! They’re...adorable! Very colorful!” Kookimarissia exclaimed, careful not to jostle the babies on each of her breasts as she reached to accept the gifts.

“I usually don’t see that many colors mixing until my tenth beer,” muttered Andrelious gruffly from his chair.

“Keep drinking that much, and you won’t see much at all,” sniffed the Miraluka, her arm still extended as she proffered two tiny little outfits.

The Imperial gave a grunting snort and waved a hand, sipping his drink. Some chatter floated around the cantina, the very place the girls had been born. Streamers hung from the ceiling, and food was passed around. Atyiru waved to Celevon. The Obelisk, at the bar, lifted his drink in a cheery salute.

“Well, I think they’re lovely. Thank you, Master,” Kooki said tiredly, smiling. Atyiru smiled back, hugging the woman gently, touching the twins’ cheeks.

“You’re welcome, my dear. And many blessings upon you all.” Her grin turned a little shy. “I hope they fit well. I had their measurements, of course, but you never know exactly when you’re knitting…”

“I’m sure they’ll be fine,” Kooki assured.

“I’m glad,” the Aedile stood, clapping her hands together. “Especially since I was torn between two ideas…”

“What was the other?” asked Andrelious.

“A miniature melon-baller. Miraluka tradition dictates the key to happiness is never to see how horrible your life’s become! And, well, all things considered...”

And with that, Atyiru grinned sheepishly and sprinted out the door. Andrelious, furious, ran shortly after her.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Rear Admiral Arcia Cortel
Textual submission

Arcia walks in, shoves a pacifier in Andrelious' mouth, then walks away. The end.

Placement
No placement
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
MBTwins13593.doc
Placement
No placement
Member
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Submission
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement