It's a long one. 12,000 words. 35 pages.
Excerpt: “Sir,” his first officer came up behind him, surprising him.
“Yes, Commander,” his gruff robotic voice responded.
“We just received reports. Massive losses. We’ve kept almost no ground.”
“Even the volunteer army?”
“Disbanded at this point, sir.”
Lanis sighed, and spoke with heavy heart, “They killed our leader. The Council refused to see what was right in front of them.”
“Sir, I’m sorry, but we have more pressing matters.”
“The weapons, I assume?”
The Commander nodded.
Lanis sighed and walked with the Commander towards a chamber.
“Are they prepped for launch?”
“One is, sir. The rest are being sent to different locations.”
“Who knows of these locations,” Lanis questioned as he entered the main Jedi Temple chamber.
“Only you, sir. The rest committed the selfless act of becoming one with the Force.”
“Good soldiers follow orders,” Lanis remarked.
TL;DR
Lanis wants to blow up reality
We stop him and arrest him, minus one bomb which blows up in their replica Jedi Temple, but really just leaves a tear in reality that we're studying
We're on a ship to bring Lanis to a special prison
Every 1st place got 5 points. Every 2nd got 3. Every 3rd got 2. Every participation point got 1.
Mauro (27) (1st Place: 1) (2nd Place: 4)
Cello (27) (1st Place: 1) (2nd Place: 3)
Reiden (26)
Kamjin (24)
Xendar (15)
Kah’ri (9) (1st Place: 1)
Shadow (9) (1st Place: 0)
Talon (8)
Rayne (7)
Xantros (5) (1st Place: 1)
Sykes (5) (1st Place: 0)
Dante (4) (2nd Place: 1)
Thran (4) (2nd Place: 0)
Ulfsark (3)
Ellac (2)
Dukwtape (1) and Horus (1)
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*The average competitions per person was 4.7
The average points per person was 10.4
Cello participated in every comp
Mauro participated in all but 1 competitions
The tie was decided by the amount of second places won. That’s how down to the wire it was.
If Reiden had put in entries for 2 other competitions, he would have won regardless of placement.
Reiden had the most first places with 4. Kamjin had the second most with 3. It’s important to participate, but a quality placement can get you farther. An entry with a little bit of extra work can do well!
Last Vendetta, we came last and had 8 unique participants. We’ve climbed to 17 unique participants for this event and 15 unique participants for the Spring Break competitions. I believe that if we went into a Vendetta today, we would do a hell of a lot better!
In the future, fictions will be done collaboratively with the Summit. This means that they won't be done by one person anymore. It will also help us with the launch of a possible story group of sorts.
Thanks to all for participation and putting in great entries!
Next major event will most likely be after the RoS!
Dek
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Great to see this chapter come to a close. Great job Dek in ensuring everyone has a moment to shine in the final wrap-up.
Awesome job with the story! Thank you for putting together this competition.