Ala'ar Rinn

Equite 2, Clan Taldryan, Mercenary, Mandalorian
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Competition
Antei Contract Bureau: Live! [2015]
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URL
https://discourse.darkjedibrotherhood.com/c/fiction/antei-contract-bureau
Notes
Round 1 apparently didn't have its own sub competition. Using this comp ID for the awarded CIs
Competition
[Survivors] The Philosopher
File submission
philosopher.docx
Textual submission

lost my internet connection, so can't add to more competitions until it's fixed.

thx

Competition
Keeping it together
File submission
keeping_it_together_Calindra.docx
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updated - July 10, 2015 - 12:25am Eastern.

Thank you!

Competition
[JW]My JW Experience
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To whom it may concern,

We were at Judecca World for our 40th anniversary, and Charles and I had an absolutely wonderful time! We were especially impressed by the free drinks we had at dinner one night! Why, I remember that folks there even put on this really dramatic show for us that same evening...

The lights and power went out just as we got to the hotel. I admit, I was a little frightened at first, but the actors did a superb job of making it feel real, but all funny at the same time. And the dinosaurs..! My! They sure looked pretty real and frightful, but it was sooo thrilling! I still don't know how they made that droid dance upside down like they did, but the dinosaurs just chirped and jumped at it, as it flailed about shouting: "Oh my! We're doomed..!"

I must say, the attention to detail was definitely there, so was room service and the general cleanliness. That is, except that very same night when something the size of a rancor left a brown mound near the parking. I mean, it was impressive seeing so many Jawas with shovels, but I imagine that the park would be better served with some industrial construction dirt diggers and haulers. I was wondering how you got all them nice botanical gardens all over; it's become evident that you don't have to outsource your fertilizer..!

We will definitely be coming back..!

Sincerely yours,

Charles and Gladys Ken d'Arby

Competition
Red Fury: Two Roads to Glory
Textual submission

The Akuls burst out of the crates and cries of Alarm soon accompanied their howls as the creatures advanced towards the hangar bay. Men opened fire at the imperial shuttles who had mere moments ago dropped the crates. House Imperium had chosen to attack exactly when the sun would be directly in the defenders' faces, the bright golden hues of the dying day making it harder for them to see their assailants. To add insult to injury, the Akul's orange fur made them blend with the dying rays, so as men squinted and fired up at the sky, they never noticed the creatures until it was too late.

Screams and gun fire erupted as the men fell to savage claws and wickedly sharp teeth, and panic soon swept through the pirate ranks as the screams of their terror-stricken brethren echoed through the battle field.

As the smoke and gun fire died down, ranks of house Imperium's Sith warriors and troops appeared through the thick dusty haze, and more cries of alarm went through the besieged compound. Turrets defenses and men started firing from the roof tops, giving away their locations.

Red blades swirled and intercepted bolts, while some more advanced Sith warriors used the Force to hurtle large boulders at their positions.

Calindra's brow was wet with sweat and dust, but she daren't remove her breathing apparatus which covered the lower portion of her face. Her long curly blond locks were hidden under a dark shoofa-like headscarf, and dark combat goggles protected her eyes from the dust and exploding debris that peppered them as their ranks advanced towards the hangar.

Lightsaber in hand, she swung downwards at one of the fallen pirates, and she moved on as his body even knew he was dead. A few of the creatures growled at them as they protected their meals, some even attacking. The later were quickly dealt with. More gun fire erupted up ahead.

By the looks of things, a cluster of pirates had been split from the main group and threatened their left flank, so Calindra motioned to the squad behind her and b-lined to intercept them. Wanting to keep her approach the less conspicuous as possible, she switched off her red bladed lightsaber, and shrouded herself with the Force, becoming just another lost soul that sought safety in numbers.

The pirates’ glances were drawn away from her, but her blending in so well would let her get close enough to strike. As she passed the first man, she activated her lightsaber in his back, delighting in his dying scream as the others turned around in surprise.

"Shit! Another one..!" someone yelled as gun fire erupted, but Calindra's lightening reflexes and martial arts training kicked in, making her very hard to hit. She jumped out of the way of incoming fire, and then turning on herself in a crouch, swept one of them off their feet. She kept on rolling, her lightsaber arm extended outwards towards another, slicing his leg off mid-tibia. With a flick of the wrist the blade thrusted upward as he stumbled and fell across the blade, his pain leaving him slowly as his body hit the ground with a thud, as Calindra followed-through with the roll and was soon back-up on her feet.

One of the larger and more seasoned of their group cursed as he realized that she was one of the Force users on the battlefield. He drew a vibrosword from its scabbard, keeping his blaster at the ready. ’A worthy opponent?' she wondered as the rest of his comrades fled towards the compound.

Grim determination crossed battle weathered face as he stepped forward to face her in battle, and Calindra felt a pang of regret at having to finish such a brave man's days. 'Such a waste,' she thought, 'but he could have chosen another life instead of choosing one of piracy.' She hardened her heart a fraction too late.

The pirate had fired his blaster, and if it weren't for her lightning reflexes she'd have taken a blaster shot in the chest. Instead, the shot burnt her left shoulder. Wincing in pain, she dodged two more shots and was upon him and abandoned herself to the moment. ‘Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength. Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me..!'

Soon her lightsaber met his sword, and the blades sparked as they met. His blade held.

She had expected and hoped it had been made of cortosis, it made this opponent more worthy and interesting, but the blades met only long enough for Calindra to parry his strike and bounce her lighsaber against his blade and to his blaster hand. He screamed in pas as it was sundered clean from his arm, and she reveled in his pain as she stepped back to avoid his retaliation.

"Looks like you need a hand," she taunted as she let him catch his breath, her own breath coming out as a rasp from the breather mask, making her voice sound eerie and metallic. To taunt him further, she placed her free hand behind her back. The intended insult was clear.

She waited to see how he would react to the insult, as he nursed his would and circled each other. Would he let his rage consume him at the insult, or would he master it? She hoped for the later. To her excitement, hatred crossed his eyes, but he fought and mastered his hatred before attacking.

It was decided, she'd let him live.

Their blades met once again, and she followed with a kick to his abdomen, then turned, and met his blade again with her own. This time however, she held it forcing him to force her own blade down towards her face. Then she extinguished her lightsaber as she sidestepped. With the resistance gone, his sword carried through; propelled by the force he'd been applying to drive the blade towards her. As a result, the man nearly fell forward. She didn't give him a chance to get back up though. She swiftly hit him at the base of his skull with the pommel of her weapon, and the man crumpled to the dust.

She picked up his blaster, and as an afterthought, decided to give him back his hand. She left it in his holster, and then hurried towards the hangar to join the others.

Competition
Red Fury: That Which Hides in the Darkness
Textual submission

Midas and Calindra both watched as the YT-1300 slowly banked towards the exit, its maneuvering jets guiding it over the other ships.

Suddenly, Akuls were on them and Calindra's red bladed lightsaber swirled to meet the first two as Midas aimed the missile launcher. It wasn't like she was facing off with another lightsaber-wielding opponent, but her martial skills made up for the lack of grace with the blade. She side-stepped one, twirled on herself and brought her lightsaber arching upward as she did so. One of the Akuls was mortally wounded, and the other received a gash down it's side.

There was a sudden roar from the missile launcher, which surprised a few of the Akuls, but they only crouched low and still looked very intent at making them their next meal. "Hurry up!" she yelled as another roar echoed through the hangar, shortly followed by two very loud blasts. "We need to move..!"

From above came the tell-tale sound of twisting metal, and Calindra gave out a curse as she bolted for the nearest exit. Perhaps shooting at the structural beams hadn't been such a good idea given they were actually ’inside’ the structure. On the bright side, it promised to get messy really quickly, but she didn't particularly care to stick around to find out how effective they had been. Right now the Akuls' plan seemed to be running towards the comforting darkness beyond a set of opened double doors, and with no time to think things through, it seemed to Calindra like the right idea.

Running with the Akuls, lightsaber swinging dangerously to and fro as the hangar's roof collapsed around them, Calindra rushed towards what she hoped was some ’relative’ safety. Okay, she was exchanging certain death for the chance to survive against an unknown number of four-legged predators... Slim chance being better than none. That was the theory at least.

The Akuls made it to the doors ahead of her and disappeared in the darkness beyond. Calindra made it through the doors, dust and rubble narrowly missing her as dust plumed out of the double doors and into the corridor, turning her clothes from black and red to a uniform grey. She quickly dusted herself as she turned to go in the opposite direction when she came face to face with another human and nearly jump out of her skin in surpise.

"Sith spit! You scared me witless!"

"Look it, she brought the house down," the man stated, "did she turn a premature grey, or is she deliberately covered in dust to mask her scent? We should observe what she does next. Aye, I agree... She who runs with Akuls might prove resourceful enough to return to the others, but first it calls to us from the darkness below..."

Wondering who she was dealing with, Calindra raised her lightsaber to see better. The figure standing before her was dressed in armour and Sith robes, his face was riddled with markings, but one of his eyes didn't look right... ’Is his pupil square...?’

"What calls from the darkness...?" she asked as she decided to take in their new surroundings.

"The Pirate King, child of darkness... come, our destiny awaits."

"You sound insane, you realise that right..?"

"She who runs with Akuls is observant, isn't she..? Wait til she figures out how far gone we actually are," he added with a cackle that echoed through the corridor and made her skin crawl.

’Great, just bloody great..!' Calindra groaned inwardly. "My name is Calindra. Let's join the others..." she suggested, hoping to change this guy's mind. 'Assuming he has one left,' she ammended to herself.

The Sith before her considered her carefully, "It talks to itself in its mind too... Interesting." The figure considered her with a smile and she bit down what she had been about to say.

"Come..." he said, "Macron wishes to go this way."

"Fine, let's do it your way..." she said as she gave up on using any logic and followed him into the darkness beyond.

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Calindra

Competition
Red Fury: The Tides of War
Textual submission

Manually added by SWL Xen'Mordin Vismorsus-Palpatine